All Comments on 'Moms at the Beach Ch. 01'

Please consider a follow up chapter where the boys swap off, son and mother, perhaps all in the same room - they do have the rest of their stay at the cabin. What better way to spend their time than turning their mom's into total fuck toys.

but i do not understand the spitting on his cock. Its already ready and wet.

and hot. Not sure about the 50-60 year old "straight" guy writing as a woman though. I don't get that why not write as yourself?

Makes me wish I had a girlfriend with a hot son and someone to share my son with at the same time. The story aroused me into feeling my own body could use some similar loving from a young stud. Encore769

I want more - this was great fantasy come true

I think you put this story in the wrong category. You're in the incest category and fucking your son's best frewind is not incest. To get story back into the incest files, fuck your son in next episode. Have children with your son and live happily ever after.

Great story!!!!! The hell with the category, the material was so well presented it kept this old man hard and hot. Now, I must read more of your thoughts and desires.

well that was one helluva hot story,loved it and look forward to the next chapter

Really liked this one.

Since it is titled Chapter 1, I hope that Chapter 2 will soon be on it's way.

This story was an interesting twist on the usual mom/son theme & I really enjoyed reading it.

5 STARS !!!!

SoulBrotherJeff

Your writting is outta dis world!!! I loved the way Andys Mom & Steve slid out together. She was ready before Sharon. Looking forward to more storys of this caliber. Thank You for a really good read. So WAY Hot!!!

Why does everyone shave their cock and balls? What happened to the sexy pubes, and even the dusting of hair on a young man's chest? He doesn't have to be a bear, but give the young man a dusting between his pecs, along the sternum, and maybe even a light treasure trail! That's sexy, especially on a man in his late teens!

Fantastic story! I felt each sentence that I read. Hope that you keep adding chapters to this one! Thanks\

Thanks for sharing.

Awesome fucking story. Can't wait to read chapter two.

I want to read everything you write that has an incest theme! Loved it.

Very good story. Good flow from start to finish. Just a few spelling and grammar errors. Do a spell check before you submit. Great job.

I would love to hear this story from the friends point of view or that of her sons

Excellent story, excited to read more. This is the kind of story that drew me to Literotica in the first place.

Love this story, as well as all your others....more from this series!

Very envious wet lady here. Wonderful detail, a friend told me about this series. I should have replenished my battery supply.... Thank you for writing this ... off to read part 2

good descriptive and great build up to a fanFRICKENtastic climax

So hot! Keep up your stories

You rival the great 'alwayswantedto' with this type story. I hope you caught his 'The Rambler' before he pulled it down. Your styles have much in common. I love to read stories by both of you.

I'd like to take this chance to answer the question of why write as a woman? Simple, stories lend themselves to a particular POV. Erotic stories told in 1st person allows the reader to feel closer connected to the characters, thus you will note most stories on Lit. are 1st stories. Had the writer tried to tell the same story from a male viewpoint it would have been entirely different since he could only write about what the man thought or felt. While that might work for the women readers, I suspect the men readers would have been less interested. Now a good idea was suggested by someone--write from the other mother's POV. Even that, however, will result in an entirely different story, but will probably be just as good.

I find that if I sit down to write a story and have picked the right tense and voice (POV) the story almost writes itself. Sometimes the characters take me in a direction I hadn't thought of going, but it almost always makes the story better.

hello from Anniston, alabama

breathtaking..... just breathtaking

..and a Hot Mary... Just loved the sexual intimacy and heightened tenderness leading to the climatic outcum...

Great story.. Looking to hear from his friend and Andy's Mom...

More than 1 hard on from me,...for sure.

Thx

AHH ! makes me feel young and horny again!

What a story - Plenty of hardness even to my older body!!!!!

Oh so good lots of good hard sex, lots of descriptions of the characters, great read

Just one little complaint: if the Moms' divorces were final in June (their exes have already remarried, after all), then in July they can fuck whoever they want, however they want, as long as they want, and whenever they want -- Mad Dog or ex-husbands be damned. The divorce and settlement agreements are done....

Looking forward to reading Chapter 2 soon! Thanks!

to handle

This is one hot read. Keep writing.

wow - what an erotic story. loved it from the first word to the last. can't wait to read the next chapter

What a read and thank you for the HUGE cum!:-)

Hope boys got you 2 woman pregnant too and not just once plus both boys fucked your cunts and ashes sametime

Hope the mothers fucked their own sons too

Five stars only because I cannot use ten stars :-)

This is going into my favorites list. I love how you constructed this mother/son set of stories by starting with the mothers being seduced by the others son. And both of these first two chapters are some of the hottest sex I have read this year. My only regret is not getting to this series sooner.

an immature comment for a kid to make to a mature woman.

to be fucked like the hot sexy bitch you are

why was the word use? So many other words available.

Wonderful story. I was held from beginning to end. You did the long, long seduction and culmination to perfection. (Often, I get bored with too much talk, but not this one.) Thank you! 5*

A sexy story of "almost incest". Enjoyed the mature/younger theme. Obviously needs a sequel to detail Ann's adventures...

Some women actually don't like tits and ears etc played with.

Some me myself included have no sexual stimulation from scrotum and balls.

Each person different.

A few authors get it right

Have couple spending time learning each other.

Porn is usually aimed at? Never figured it out as usually wrong

Not bad writing, simple and clean, as was the story. I thought the mother-son exchange scenario was good, but the way it was told didnt wow me. Needs a little jalapeno!

Nicely done! I can see how 40-something women would love to have young studs making them feel sexy and desired. The issue of trusting such young men is at least partially resolved by the fact that both women have known these young men for all their lives. So much easier to let go and enjoy!

Thoroughly enjoyable copulation I'm so jealous

Most enjoyable read, always enjoy some shower sex myself, washing each other can be so erotic as you clearly demonstrated.

Looking forward to chapter 2! Great job!!!

Sorry, I like the story, but you get only *4* stars-this IS a generically-written course of events. As another commenter said, "needs some spice", or words to that effect.

Also, you mislead readers with your "Mary Anderson" author name...then, looking at your Biography, you are a man. Now, I like male authors; BUT, you write very much like a man, not as a woman would. A lot of your conversation, on the part of Andrew, is DEFINITELY male-themed (aggressively-so). Not that it is inappropriate, per-se, just not like a lady/woman would write it. Was really hoping you are a woman writer...

Just brilliant. One or two typos spoiled the flow a little, but thats just me. Thank you for the time and effort you have put into your story.

SUPER HOT!!!! Thanks a lot!!!

fuck the detracters, I enjoyed it again!

Would have given it a five but, why use words like 'cock-whore', bitch and hungry cock sucking bitch?

You did such a good job of establishing tenderness and intimacy only to ruin it by reverting back to male chauvinism.

When I was 38 yrs old I fucked my friends son who was 19 at the time. I did him because my daughter told me he had the biggest cock her and her friends have every seen. She was right it was thick and long it was the most beautiful black cock I have every fucked . I let him fuck me when every he wanted too. I did have a 3 way with him and my daughter. He did get my daughter knocked up.

Excellent, now for part 2.

God! This is some good shit. I came like crazy. Although you could have avoided the use of whore and bitch etc.

I know what's its like to be fucked by my friends son and once you get over the guilt about fucking him you love it. My sons friend came on holiday with my son and me. One night my son stayed out and we lay watching a film. I had on a baby doll nightie which was nearly see through. His friend had some drink and his hands began to wander then he kissed me. I let him feel my tits then finger fuck me. He took off his shorts and I wanted him when I saw his long cock. He mounted me and we fucked for about 40 minutes before he pumped his sperms into me. When my son came back the next day and found us fucking he watched and went to his friends room which he used the next two weeks.

Nice story...well-developed characters and storyline; some of the 'aggressive' dialogue could be toned back...😵😱

Now, the 'incest' angle has been left open; it appears to me that the boys are going to swap 'mate's and do their mothers soon...plus, two girls next door...leaves the next 4 parts open to lots of incestial and group encounters!!!!

Five**5**Stars...you almost got *4*, edit your stuff better!!

Fabulous!

5 stars but he had wanted her for years like she was his auntie so he wouldn't have called her a filthy hot bitch. Does a woman have to be a bitch or a slut just because she likes fucking.

Just finished this first chapter. Can't wait to slowly devour the rest! Great erotic writing!

Who needs the girls next door?

Send me these women!

Mary, as all the stories this is purely fantastic. When worshipping the partner comes in between the lust and need, it amalgamates into an intense combo

meh. Teenage is wayyyyyy too young!!! I NEED a grown man whos at least 30.

I hope there is another chapter after this! An orgy perhaps between the two couples? Thanks for this!

My friend & I grew up where we called each other's mums, aunty. I always wanted to fuck his mum, & mine. & he wanted to fuck mine & his too.

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Damn good opening chapter