All Comments on 'Moms at the Beach Ch. 06'

let's go back to the mothers and sons and the twin sisters. Let's say after a year the sons are married to the twin sisters. Then they all live together and their everyday routine being naked and touching, licking , fucking anywhere around the house.

"Now let's go back to basic" I can fully agree with the author of this comment.The real important thing in an erotic story is not so much in the rather mechanical "OH,Oh, ....my god" parts as in the surrounding descriptions of interesting caracters and observations. And the author did a much better job with the parts 1-4

I agree with rodav. That would be great!

WHAT HAPPENED TO CHAPTER 5??????

I didn't take it down. If the good people at Literotica don't respond to my e-mail inquiry I will repost it in a few days.

Its like starting a whole new story jumping from chapter 4 to chapter 6. Someone must of gotten so worked up reading the first 4 chapters they dropped chapter 5 on the floor and didn't realize it. LOL

ch.6 ? Need Ch. 6 ??????? Please!!!!!!??????

the most recent comment, but I do not understand what is being asked. Can you give me some help?

fantastic sex scenes. very erotic. love this story.

last few paragraphs were best. ones when Dad comes home and explains it

Still jarred by the backstory change, but gave this 4 stars just because of the promise implied in the ending.

Loved the story. Butt plug scenes wear awesome

The seducers become the seducees, sounds about right! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.