All Comments on 'Mom's Best Friends Ch. 01'

Well done. Erotic and hot. This story still has a lot of potential if you choose o write more chapters. Thank you for your effort.

I hope you have more in store for these two. It was hot the way you pull them together and the finale when they both got off from the same thought. Bravo!

You regularly refer to her tuition

Not bad at all

Love the older woman younger man, and the woman with a full hairy bush in pantyhose.

But be careful.

"Anyway, they had invited me over for dinner next week."

You wrote the story in past tense but you included a present tense word in this paragraph. It would have been better to write "the following week" than next.

Great introductory story about Ron and Sheila. Great description of the progression and sex. More please