All Comments on 'Mom's Friend, Nice Lady'

More detail please. This was the written version of boring generic online porn. If you write something with more build up/ emotion behind it and more detail it will be much better.

yes this is the short script to the mfhm movies that are so boring,even i couldve written this and im no writer

I read the first few paragraphs, then couldn't read any more because you fucked up the sentences! Quit hitting the Enter key until you actually want a paragraph!!

Pretty general porn. Not developed enough. Very poor construction.

Old Stud Bull

i met my best friend's son in this way.