by DaddyJack
THIS SHOULD BE A MOVIE, I LIKE IT. NOW YOU HAVE ALL WHO READS THIS IN YOUR POCKET. PLEASE DONE TAKE TOO LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I LIKE THE WAY IT'S COMING TOGETHER. AND MOM A REAL GENIE , BUT SHE READS FROM A BOOK AND NOT WIGGLING HE NOSE. GOOD READ KEEP IT UP.SEE YOU NEXT YEAR JACK. OR SOONER. A FAN.....LAROC OF AGES
please make the son impregnate his mom, aunt and grandmother ... well that will be a story of ultimate incest ....
Please continue writing this story my mom and I are enjoying this story so much, she sucks me after reading each chapter and now she fucks me too as she is sooo horny from reading it
No, Laroc, Genie crossed her arms and blinked, it was Samantha the WITCH who wiggled her nose. Looks like Freddy's grandma is a witch too, reading spells from her spell book.
You can't stop now DaddyJack, you have to post chapter 5!
Don't leave your readers hanging please write the rest of the story
Well guys, I think this is another one of those. Get everybody into the story and anxious to read the next chapter and then................................
Three years and nothing more? The muse must have left you. Or you ran away with her to some secluded island somewhere.
COME BACK, JACK!!!
Chapter 1 was really the only chapter I liked a lot! Then the story just kind of faded for me, but I liked finding out that Deb and Sally's father was Freddy's dad. But hey, I like your work! Keep it up my friend!
Great story, loved the connectedness of it all. I wish there were another chapter or two!
Where are the rest of the stories? You can't just stop there. If this was to be an erotic novela, continue. I did not see the name of the stories saying "What if ..."
Need more. MUST HAVE MORE!!!
But, what about the ending? I was so into the whole storyline & then it ended with so many questions unanswered.
Finally hit the dump line. d/d is an auto 1 star which = .000001 star. now go back vote 1 on each chapter. I hate d/d and I get to vote...
Okay, it's been almost 10 years now... Won't you at least throw us a bone here and give up the ending?
Please?
Although this story was written 13 years ago, I would thoroughly enjy seeing the author return and finish it.
I would love to find out what the sister could have sex with sex and with aunt or what ???????