by Cockhole
Super Hot. Nice to see a story with unusual twists. Also as others have said you have a writing style. 5Stars
Wonderful narration, reminded me forty years back, I was 14 at that time.& Purchased one Roliflex camra & shooting all over. I shoot many nudes mom without knowing her. After twenty years mom discovered them. She was sixty then.
Mom showed me the still prints. Also to my wife. I make no delay & fuct my wife in front of Mom & shooting all over Mom's naket legs.
WOW!!
That was incredibly hot. I can’t wait for the next chapter to see how long Tiffany and Ben can hold out before the start fucking each other’s brains out. Then is when the incest part starts.
This is the best mother and son story I have ever read, Its unfolding at just the right pace. Well thoughtout. Even though she seemed to give in quickly, as this is acceptable after her son shot his load all over her .
Dare I say keep up the brilliant writing.
This whole series was a joy to read, a filthy thrill every few minutes. Thanks for sharing, x
This is the best BOOK STORY I've ever read. The concept, incest, bit gits, big cock and redhead. Just everything I love!
The story is good, the writing is good but I hated Ben. He's a trash unlikable character.
As is mentioned in Ch. 1, I wrote the part of Tiffany with Christina Hendricks in mind, but whatever helps you visualize a hot voluptuous mom, go for it.
Quick tip:Imagine Tiffany as Lauren phillips(a pornstar) it helps, mainly as a base. Keep up the amazing work!
Love the concept and the writing is also good. Keep up the good work.
Great story. This is my 3rd read through. When are you going to post chapter 7? waiting patiently..
Wow, what a great way to capture the getting caught that first time.
Love the POV video series.
7400 in 8 months c'mon that's like 30 times a day for months
Makes me wish I could actually see the video's. Seven pages went by too soon.
You’ve written a great story. Story line, character development, premis and seven pages no less, all brought together by you. On to the next chapter.
Wow, great story line, looking forward to the next chapters!! Keep writing!!!!
I accidentally tapped four stars when I meant to give five stars!
Got up to page 4 and I shot my wad. Great pacing and teasing, both for Mom and the reader. Can't wait to finish. Awesome writing!
I know it is more than an introduction, but this is the perfect set-up. Very slow pace but nevertheless hot and arousing without any physical contact. I love these slow evolving stories with multiple parts.
Tiffany is very likeable and so damn sexy.
WOW! I LOVE THE STORY AND I LIKE THE DOT,DOT,DOT'S, MR. ALL CAPS TYPIST.
The length of the story doesn't bother me one bit. Mom having ginormous tits is OK even though I'm not a big fan because the main character has that fetish. I cant wait to read chapter 2. ***** and you have been added to my fav author list.
Not normally a fan Of incest stuff but this is seriously believable . Looking forward to chapter 2
Wow. You definitely know how to make a person want more. Can't wait to read more of this story and others as well!
Another fantastic series. Love the emphasis of the big tits but above all the detail about Tiffany’s sexy outfits and painted toenails. She is teasing her son all the time. She can’t help being so hot!!
Makes me really wish I a son or two. Videos are so much fun! It won’t be long before Tiffany is all in or maybe I should say Ben is all into... I must admit watching a 19 year old work his big cock would make my day, son or not. Chapter 2 should be great, mom/son and dad/dau porn are so very hot! Not much better.
Thank you all for you comments and excellent feedback. Chapter 2 is online now.
Such a wonderful story and on my birthday. Just love mom story's with sons who have big cocks. Can't believe I could get so hard and shoot so much cum on my 60th Bday. Keep writing love to all the motherfuckers out there jacking off to our big titty moms.
Hot and fun! What else can we ask for? I am so looking forward to read the next chater already. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work, ^__^
Really good start. I can't wait to read chapter 2. I hope it comes out soon
I don't usually comment but this was one hell of a story. Nicely done. Ready for chapter 2.
This story was hot but if only the videos would really exists would make if way better. Good job on the story keep the coming.
Just a bit on the wordy side. Not TOO much, mind you, just a bit.
HOTTEST STORY I'VE READ IN QUITE SOME TIME, REALLY. CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 2. GET YOUR ASS IN GEAR AND WRITE SOME MORE! THANK YOU. OTHER THAN THE DOT DOT DOT DOT's THROUGHOUT THE STORY IT'S PRETTY DAMN GOOD. IF YOU'RE LISTENING TO IT ON A GOOD TEXT READER LIKE TEXTALOUD WITH JENNIFER'S VOICE IS HOTTER THAN FUCK, TILL YOU HEAR THE DOT DOT DOT DOT. WHY? WHO FUCKING KNOWS WHY A WRITER DOES THIS FOR PAUSE AND EFFECT. I USED TO THROW THESE AWAY WHEN THEY CAME TO MY DESK FOR READING WHEN I WERE AN EDITOR. IF IT WAS A GOOD STORY LIKE THIS ONE I'D TAKE THE TIME TO CIRCLE AND WRITE A FEW NOTES AND SEND IT BACK BUT,,,
Just Wow. The story is great. It starts slow and progress in a semi believable fashion. Please continue and give us chapter 2 soon.
Awesome story. You didn't drag mom into acquiescence too soon. She's hot, more naive than dumb...it was a good idea having dad having his own affair. Made mother's yearning more palatable. Great story.
and a very good one too! I could not stop reading this amazing story. Thank you for your newest update. It is quite a scheme and the mom is a masterpiece.
Cockhole, you are highly talented! You really have to write way more stories than in the last few months... :-)
Thank you for sacrificing so much of your time!
Fucking unbelievable! I loved it!! Please say that chapter 2 is all set to be published.
Very hot story. Would have preferred this to be a stepmom-stepson scenario, but great job nonetheless.
Glad to see you still producing GREAT literotica...keep it up! :-)
Adriana