All Comments on 'Mom's in Town'

Party on and look for her son to paint her face too. ....

I assume she meant servicing dirty old bastards like her son's boss on demand.

Where was the incest?

This whole scenario is so unlikely it beggars belief.

Please stop writing

It might have started good.

Then you through in the gay shit

without warning me in the tags.

Please do not post any more stories on this site until you have halfway mastered basic English and grammar. This attempt is rubbish.

Lol@ anon. I came here because of the comment he left about how it beggars belief. He's right, the only thing that could have topped it if you had written:

"No Brian, you are the fag"

"... and then Brian was the zombie"

The only thing I can say that wouldn't be blatantly slamming your (in)ability to write would be to say that your attempts at grammar and punctuation are ...unique?

"Mary said to her son over brunch on Sunday"

"Later, Christine arrived at the store, and ..."

Get your names straight! Makes it seemed like you copied the story from some other site...

The story not bad till you added the gay bit !!

You need an editor for sure and I agree, it does look like its been copied from another site.

Why dont you leave this story writing to those that can !!

I believe that this is the first time I have read a story that made me angry, no enraged.

If I had the opportunity, I would beat the crap out of you. Don't EVER write another story!

Other than that, have a lovely day.

A read. Thanks

seems to be that everyone who has commented is positive that it is rubbish

Why did you bother.

Hey, Lit user! Just wanted to say that this is now my favorite Incest taboo story. You might read that people are telling you to get an editor. They told me the same in my first part of the story, but believe me. I like the way you write, i like your style, keep up the good job, you'll learn by commiting mistakes and learning from them. No need for an editor

For me

I am not sure who I would rather be, the mother or the son. Aww I am the mother. Lovely story line great ideas

Loved when Mom was not only exposed for being a slut, but then could not resist sucking a cock in front of her son.

This was a fun first but I'm curious to see what if son becomes in front of her as she does her thing will he dress up in sexy lingerie & vintage stockings I put on a sexy pair come fuck me high heels & turn into beautiful doll, as I wish to be myself.

Well that was unexpected 🔥❤️