All Comments on 'Mom's Journal'

But yes to everything else.

I'm hoping for a series here.

The rest of the story was hot. I would like to read the sequel.

great story

Your story was good, but it could use an editor as the spelling was very bad and for a writer to talk about another writer's words, even notes, should have correct spelling and punctuation. Keep writing but edit for spelling and meaning i.e. "I cloths my eyes and opened my mouth " i believe you meant "I closed my eyes and opened my mouth " but the meaning is clear..... just confusing as a reader.

Great premise. Knife play isn't something I come across (usually) in the incest section, as someone who enjoys it, I thought it was a nice surprise. As was previously mentioned, there some typos but I think it was a nice plot. Don't let the typo thing discourage you, keep up the sinful pleasures!

Please continue, this was well written even with a couple errors, and as for others complaining about content they object to, it's your story write it as you see fit.

You just made a great story here. It would be cool to read it till the end. Goodluck.

The only thing 'clear' about this is that the author is functionally illiterate.

Good story without the razor blades.

She mouth was open? Did you even read that out loud? * and even that is generous.