by SLC-Ohio
This was hot! I wished it was longer and a little more indepth but what you have is good and I won't be greedy. Please keep going with this- it's really good.
Now that the wife has admitted what she needs from him, the door is wide open for some interesting situations, don't you think?
...that is implied by the category chosen? It isn't a bad story, on the whole, but disappointing if you want what's promised.
Freddy
Hi,
Nicely done. I'm surprised that literotica changed the story to incest from exhibition!
I agree with a previous comment that it was just a bit too short but nice with the first person and the dialogue. Would be good to also include the thoughts of the author as the dialogue went back and forth between her parents.
No, I don't think anyone wants to read about what happened when you were underage ...
Jack
Very nicely done. If the intention is to keep your readers wanting more, then you have hit a bullseye. Very sexy and arousing.
I am on my way to read some of your other works.