All Comments on 'Mom's Man'

Ok, you got my attention in the first part of the story, with her being in a "funky" mood, but then you try to explain to the readers how you had seen your mom naked through her window. After that, you somehow went to her being drunk and you helping her out and then later she is seducing you. What happened to the first part of the story? You never finished that. It seemed like you either forgot about what you started to write about, or that someone else wrote the ending. Either way, it really is bad. You also need an editor to help you with your spelling and grammar. I really never give bad reviews, but your does need some work. I would suggest that you remove the story (if that can bbe done) and rewrite it. Then have someone edit it. If it reads better, then submit it. Just IMHO.

I've always ignored any comment that the person wouldn't sign. This is really a good story. It has a ring of reality to it.

Just as he was finally going to get some of that sweet pussy from his mom, and fill her with his young healthy cock, the story ends. That isn't nice to do to us poor horny readers. Do you know that the writer gods will get you for that, and maybe lock your caps lock button down,AND THEN ALL YOU WILL BE ABLE TO DO IS, WRITE LIKE THIS. Thanks for the good short story.......Rich

I can't believe I've had stories rejected for unknown reasons, and this one makes it onto the site!

Is english the first language of the people who make these decisions?????

Pretty lousey writer

Your comment has more punch if the word lousy...is spelled correctly.

Cheers !!!!!!

I wish my mom would do that...I always dreamed of her...great story I jacked off to it.

Im not an expert writer but this needs a lot of work

This goes from nothing happening between them to "nothing is off limits"and then the story never ends it just stopped