by black_moth
I actually enjoyed it. Every thing you wrote sounds as if it could happen. Hopefully it leads to him fucking his mom on a regular basis. Also I hope to see mom has a beautiful hairy landing strip instead of shaved . Keep writing.
Why do people write half or less of a story? It had such promise, but fizzled to crap.
Great start. Good to see Mon playful and opening up.
Well written. Thanks for sharing.
her nipples were the same size as a hotdog...have you ever seen a hotdog before?
Really liked the story but in my opinion the story needed to be a bit longer. Give us a little more before you conclude the chapter. Great story concept.