All Comments on 'Mom's So Hot! Pt. 08'

Good ending, look forward to your next story, but don't take so long between chapters!

Finally the ending, have been waiting. Hope that your next installment will be just round the corner

they didn't have to suffer too much from this family they had quickly picked up and left some time ago. smart and instinctive people

It surely is the hottest, not one of the hottest, story ever posted here or anywhere, i think.

This sure waas a hot story. Mom has the roundest heels that anyone has ever seen. Now let them fade of into the distance. the author needs to find another thread to follow

The story up to this chapter was way above average with a few things not tyng together but chap 8 just doesn't go with the story new people that haven't been there before ruining the story

With all those chapters of hot sex I dont think there was one of those sluts that gave a blow job.

Not a bad story, but pretty much same thing in each section.

anyone else think its ironic how rita having a baby is what caused Tom to fuck his mom in the first installment and now Nan is gonna have a baby...

What can I say that hasn't already been said about this great piece of work. Well writen, totally off the wall and just captivating. Well done and many thanks for such a good story...........Rich

Your story is really erotic . U really took care of everybody's feelings. End it beautifully. GREAT.....................

A talented author makes a mess of what could have been a very good story. A guy has been cheated on thrice by the woman he loved and he still continues to love her and deceive the woman he's in a relationship with now despite knowing what it feels to be on the other side. Doesn't make a lot of sense.

Still, this story had a lot of potential after chapter 1.

sorry dude best start, good flow, good pickup, bad dragging, worse ending. (As i expected when you did not threw jim out of the hosue). It was not even worse ending it was worst ending. I dont what came into your mind, ending should be all happy, or more realastic. But you put some kind of shit.

I give you 100/100 for start and letting things go, things were getting better when mom wanted to come to boy, but i think jim must be your fav character that cud be the only reason you made it worst ending of all stories on internet found. i dont think i ever gonna read your story again. because you put high expectations , drag the story and end with shit. next time try with more realastic ending. brother-sister coupling for children is worst setup you made. Sorry dude for being so harsh. i hope you understand my frustration after reading almost 40 chapters. you just gave us shit.

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hope you start thinking next time try to keep your readers, you fan.

i was alsmost you fan when i read 20 chapters, on other site and was waiting for long time to read next, and finally found on this website. and see what i get. Just tell me one thing Why bro? why? didnot you throw jim out of house. he was shit charcter in the house.

Thanx again for really good starting chapters.

question is can you make it atleast better, which definitly show your talent if if you have any. make it up to your next readers man, this was great story to start and if someone read it to end he will curse you nothing else.

try to make it up to your readers.

I'm surprised that with every member of this family being so sexually liberal and horny all the time, no one seems to be into oral, tit-fucking (they all seem to have massive ones except Maggie) or doggystyle, among other variations. It was basically 8 chapters of repetitive kissing and orthodox sex, and by the end I couldn't wait for it to be over. Shame, because it could have been really great.

This was the most fantastic and prolonged story ... well done!!

I wish this author had more submissions.

Excellent. Keep writing. u have got it. Nothing like fucking mother.

Excellent story. but when Tom going to have Pete 's wife

This was well worth the wait. I am sure, You will bless us with more of your style of writing.

Thanks again

ED

You stated earlier in the series that Tom did not enjoy oral sex. But it was so unrealistic, that so much interaction between so many people it never evolved beyond vanilla sex, incest not withstanding. For that reason, I give two thumbs down.

The best mother and son story I have ever read!!!!- Longing for your new ones!!!!!!

This series has been the most sexy & erotic story I've ever read. All the characters developed wonderfully, and the sexual interaction was superb...

The best series i have read so far on this site! Keep up the good work!

This story had so much potential, but you tried to do too much. Too many family members having sex, and all that kinda ruined the story for me. The first couple were really good though.

The first part of story was really good but I notice you use the exact same phases when people moan even if its different people and also on the first part tom and mom were fucking way too much but I did not really mind and then the thing with rita and the dad was interesting I did not mind it i guess and then the pete part happened.... that killed the story from that part on the story was pretty much shit... I skipped through the rest of the story as most of it was just recycled martial. It would of been nice if tom and the mom turned into a happy couple and that would of been great but you ruined it with all this family stuff and tom was quiet a fucking pussy. All the times he watched his mom getting fucked by his family he did not even intervene which is really stupid. But the first part of the story was one of the best things I have read so far it just sucks how it turned out like this. Plus to add about the pete thing when it happened I was so sad and depressed since I was so attached to tom and mom and then he came in.... Oh well

First the bad:

Short sided character development, and a weak formulating plot structure ,with no real continuity or flow made the story seem to go all over the place, and 'em I to believe nobody in this story likes oral sex, or positions other than missionary, and occasional doggy. Finally I was left "hanging" by a rather unstimulating climatic(?) ending.

However you do have a wonderful, and vivid imagination, especially with the mother Vicky. She was a huge turn on for me and i enjoyed reading her scenes immensely. I like the fact of her son spying on her as she was having sex with the other male characters at different points in the story. Though I would have loved to read more about her seducing, and eventually fucking her daughter Maggie's boyfriend Brad, and more of a build up to fucking her son Daniel. Also the first of many plot twist with Pete was hot, because it actually made me, as the reader, "feel" the conflicting emotions of her son Tom.

Again, great descriptive writing. There is where your talent lies, to me anyway.

Peace.

at chapter two

Loved the beginning chapters with Mom, Dad, Son, Daughter in law - got unrealistic for me after that with all the complex of family members obviously in easily compromising locations but none got caught and they never seemed to ever be at risk.

That many people in one house fucking each other, I was hearing Benny Hill music in my head from time to time.

I like the style and description of the scenes, but I agree with some of the other feedback, it does require different descriptions depending on the partners involved.

Thanks for a great series of the story !!!!!!!

Wish u cud write more with new pairs and groupies

Why did a good story have to run into a 3 ring circus? Perfectly good stories until you keep adding people.

This is what happens when a series runs on far too long. Part 1 was a riot of fun, but it was all downhill from there.

This is an excellent example of what not to do.

Part 1 was hotter than hell. After that too much happened. I'm a jealous person so some parts bothered me. I would have liked it better if mom was pregnant too

...but then went completely downhill. Like a lot of people, I don't understand what on earth you were thinking; creating a sexy premise and then completely balls-ing it up. Once Pete came along in part 3, the whole thing fell apart. Incest aficionados want intense, passionate connections between close family members; not just a grab-bag of random, entirely arbitrary sexual pairings.

It's a real shame, as you've obviously got some talent, but this just became a total and utter mess.

Basically turned into "my mom's a slut and no one in my family knows the meaning of the words 'in love with you'."

Add to that his father isn't into sex for twenty-plus years until it's time to fuck his daughter-in-law...

And not only will Tom not try to stop anyone from fucking the woman he professes to be in love with but he'll forgive her for fuckng all sorts of guys and even leaving him

Total BS...

This story should have finished after part 2. Once Pete was introduced, it went downhill badly. Love, passion and sex is what I believe incest stories should be about and not Studio 54.

the whole story there was too much filler. It was like squirrel and it went a different direction. Too many distractions. Why was Pete even part of the story line in the end. It was boring most of the time I skipped a bunch

I loved this story until Vicky got swayed by Peter, just from an initial kiss after only a few months with Tom.

I was perturbed and annoyed about Tom not tackling the situation, over and over again.

What started out as a beautiful story between a frustrated mother and her son, ended up with his mother turning into a wanton woman who can be had by anyone who kisses her.

Tom’s no angel either.

Good writing though.

bad story

Enjoyed the episodes; I was with you until the baby came along at the end...

How are the ratings of that story so good? The majority of the comments are negative and highly critcal (righlty so, imo).

Incest just seemed to be the bait to get readers until the author lost himself in his fantasies.

Read all parts in one evening. The title as the story progresses changes from Hot Mom to Hot Family. The author does a great job in evoking emotions from the reader - like/dislike for some characters - intense dislike of Jim and Pete along with complete disgust for the Hot Mom; as I see it. Nothing wrong with the streamy sex, but the rabbit-like hopping from crotch to crotch sorta kinda turned me off. Nevertheless, I enjoyed the story and I think the author has put together one helluva story!

Garbage. Pure garbage.

When Pete first showed up, that was the beginning of the end. A beautiful story went right into the toilet. So now we have the conclusion at the end of Part 8. After all the musical beds, we’re supposed to believe that everything is now resolved. That will last until the next time Pete rolls into town.

I liked the story at the beginning and ended disliking it. This story should have been titled the "cheating hearts" The sex scenes were hot, but in a way this whole story was just very ugly!