by johnjinglez1
This story will redeem chapter 3. I do really enjoy this series and the mother.
Still need to figure out away to undo the fucktards, turning them into a bad dream works great. If you stick with that , your back on track to greatness chapt 4 was a great raunch fest of the highest caliber.
I usually really hate the whole it was a dream BS, but the story really needed it after the last chapter. I really enjoyed this chapter a lot. I hope you continue with the mom/son relationship.
Since the dad won't take her on a date, maybe have the son do it. Have them really date like she is his girlfriend and the relationship expands a lot from there.
really enjoying it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Glad the blackmail was a dream and not happening.
OK, your back in good graces and the story is on track. Keep up the good work.
I like that you turned the previous chapter into a dream, I hadn't enjoyed where the story started going. I did like the redirection in this chapter though. Love the series, thanks!
I agree with others and that was a smart move with the nightmare. I was disappointed with that part of the last chapter.
The 'save' through the nightmare woould be ok but what happened to the roomate that stole his mothers number?
The author realised that they fucked up and tried to save by making it a nightmare but it doesn't work. Then they added a new woman into the mix. This story should have been all about mother son romance.
Not sure if the author can save this story series now to be honest. Real pity that one scene about blackmail and then trying to fob us off as a nightmare has ruined a very nice and promising start to this story series.
Loved the twist with the nightmare. Very creative. Keep going loving this.
Good save with the "it was just a dream" approach (terrible but hey better than that shit from the last chapter).
The father seems to be suspiciously absent at convenient times. Is he fucking around perhaps?