by GriffyD_Boy
Probably my favourite ever story in this category. Especially liked the way the female characters evolved. Unfortunately you've set such a high standard, I fear Ch. 3 may be a let down. Hope you can prove me wrong!
Thank you for the compliment. I have to admit to being nervous about the reaction to the next part myself. Part two, consisting of chapters 3 and 4 was submitted today and hopefully it will be up soon.
It's not as sex filled as the first part. This is due to some plot points that had to happen before I could progress the story in the direction I wanted it to go in.
All I can say is, please stick with me. I hope you enjoy the ride and the action gets hot and heavy again in chapter 5.
Great story line - very erotic concept and execution by Monica leading the way. Can’t wait to read next segments