All Comments on 'Monogamy For Swingers'

The story was great in the begining but seems to have taken a wrong turn already making plans on who else to fuck and not having sex between themselves has removed the intimacey of a healthy marrage. Not good.

Well written, great flashes of humor, ignore the other comments about the lawyer and the wrong turn. It's fantasy folks, and a well constructed one at that. Read it for what it is not as a moral tale. Keep it up

We had talked about it with this couple in generalities, but when it came down to actually exchanging partners, the husband of the other couple wasn't too sure that his wife would go for it. My husband assured him to go for it and he would make it O K with his wife. Little did he know that my husband had already had a go with his wife and she was raring to go IF I could get her husband to dive in first.

That started a 3 year swapping session that added another couple along the way.

If I or my wife would rather have sex with someone else, we would split. I mean whats the point, just use the marriage to find other couples?

As it being simply a fantisy it was well written but there were places that made it hard for the reader to place themselves into the story. I think that it would have been alot better if the married couple would have had sex at the end as well as talking about their future. It was by no means a bad story, it turned me on, but it would have been nice if you were led to believe that the marriage would last, and if all they could talk about was other people I doubt they are going to remain together much longer.

Well written fantasy. Hope there's another chapter.

Great story - good luck in the contest.

STARTED GOOD BUT SEEMED YOU WERE IN A HURRY TO FINISH.THE TEASE COULD HAVE BEEN LONGER.ANOTHER CHAPTER COMING?

Not very often a story gets me this hard. I guess it was monogamous but lets get to the sister act in a repeat.

I especially liked the first voyeur of her and his reaction and her catching him. Great imagination.

I don't know about the majority, but I think you have a winner!

Enjoyed this. Had a touch of reality which sets it apart. Good luck in the competition!

I loved this story up until the last conversation between the husband and wife. Once she started making plans for them to start banging everything with a pulse.... it lost something for me. The believability would have still been there if they were just talking about the other couple. Broadening the scope of their conquests so fast, made me feel like the wife was just itching to get laid by others. She seemed willing to give her sister up as a concession so she could find others. Oh well.

I did 56 replacements for this story, probably not all need to have the story sound less pompous or stilted, but reads better anyway. Is this a Brit practice? Agree that rapid character changes spoils stories and show that author ran out of ideas how to handle a situation.

This story left me looking for the sequel. Will there be a next episode.

I am waiting

Oh yeah you got to continue with this story, You have to tell us if they do indeed to the dirty !!! Thanks

Till someone gets shot in the eye.

I love this story, and how orgasmic & enthusiastic Sally is! Write more...and more! Hot AND well-written!

Probably the most appropriate pen name I have ever encountered.

A good writer with just the right amount of perversion. Love your writing.

I laughed til it hurt. A few can write tear jerkers, but few can write humour.

You write very well. Reading stories are more enjoyable when I'm not pointing out spelling errors. I loved the story and hope one day my wife and I can be in this same situation. You had me completely hard until the point where Sally went completely swinger when she brought up her sister. That personality didn't jive with her reluctance throughout the rest of the story.

Great story. Wish I would have found it years ago. I think it could go on for a lot more chapters. I would not have jumped right away to Sally suggesting Roger play with her sister.

Suppose Bill, Roger, Sally and Char sat down and talked about what happened that morning. Perhaps defined some different limits and then played again together.

Is it procreating if the man pulls out before he shoots? What if the woman is on the pill? Then could he come inside her?

I loved how Char was on top of Roger and there was that little bit of mystery as to whether his cock had entered her a little bit.

Would love to read more.