by Margin Walker
A delightful story. Written very well, nicely paced, good descriptions (especially of Monolith), and a great build up to an erotic finish! I am looking forward to more.
Not a bad story. Two things I noticed:
"Though I bring in less people..." should be "Though I bring in fewer people..."
"The beast takes it's time..." should be "The beast takes its time..."
I loved how you described Adara dancing, so sexy.
Author, you are so very creative!!! Reading this gave me such a sense beauty and comfort
Indeed, the beast is inside us all.
Very good could do with more episodes of Monolith's sexual exploits, probably Ladies from the Audience involved.