All Comments on 'Monolith Ch. 03'

by Margin Walker

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wudelfinwudelfinover 18 years ago
Acheivement

To describe this story in one word. In a soft whisper "damn."

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Absoloutely fantastic

I... wow. This is a truly brilliant story. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
MORE

Aside from the erotic aspects of this story, the mystery draws me deeper. We need more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
please please continue this story!!

this story is very different from your other stories. I want to know what happens next!

TheBull1965TheBull1965over 14 years ago
Breathtaking

<p>What a masterwork you have brought to us - I humbly bow my horns before your skill. Well shaped characters, cpativating build up, the dance alone is priceless, but the fight-dance at the end - I was glued to it. This is a tale that haunts you, never lets you go, once you have read it. And you wish to know more. Hints dropped at the right moments make you crave for more.

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<p>Thank you for this tale.</p>

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<p>With a mighty stomp</p>

<p>The Bull</p>

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