All Comments on 'Monstrous Ranch Ch. 00'

The next chapter should be up in a day or so at most!

Outraged am I!!' That this story (prolog) ended so soon. Jokes aside, I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

Hopefully we can get some more slime girl action :D Thats strangely the first thing I think of when I hear "Monster Girl"

I really look forward to when things start to heat up. The only thing that confused me a bit was this part in the start:

"unrestricted from natural attraction to a female breast"

I don't know if that suggest homosexuality, I doubt it, that he's not married or in a relationship or that's he's a sex fiend. Or the uncle is just crasy.

Keep up the good work.

Im not interested in pointing out the grammar or spelling issues cause mine is just as bad....

However I really enjoyed the start of this story, cant wait for chapter 2.

Thanks for sharing it.

This is awesome! I love that you're starting a new venture with a new set of characters. I look forward to the next chapter!

I'm excited for this series to start (albeit disappointed that Ch. 01 didn't go up immediately—I deliberately submitted them together to minimize delay). Some responses:

1. "Unrestricted from attraction to the female breast" means "straight", though it was intentionally weirdly-worded. His uncle wanted a heterosexual male heir.

2. SHIT! Slime girls! I can't cheat you guys out of slime girls twice! I actually forgot about them, but I know just where to slip them in. Maybe I'll cut back on another fey to make room. :)

3. Regarding my grammar, thanks? This feels almost like negging, but whatever. My grammar's always got room to improve, as does anyone's. ;D

this is a non-con / mind control / femdom / cuck story with monster girls i got all the way to chapter 4 before I realized weak willed MC was staying that way

A short chapter. I didn't understand anything, but it looks good.

I'm leaving Anon's comment up because it's mostly accurate (a lot of people seem to get quite upset when a monster girl story isn't maledom, as it turns out), but as a quick correction, there is no cuckoldry kink in this story. :)