All Comments on 'Monstrous Ranch Ch. 16'

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GigglingGoblinGigglingGoblinover 6 years agoAuthor
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warelliswarellisover 6 years ago
Getting darker!

Judging from the worries his sister is getting from the weirdness regarding the letters, and what just happened to Seven, the story is getting darker.

I really do hope they can pull through okay.

As for Mommy & Senya, that was hot! I do sort of wish we could've gotten the two to miss like we saw back in Chapter 6 & 7. :D

Those 4 little fairies were fun, especially Ora~. I have this image of them wanking Senya off a lot with their full body rubs on his cock~. Hmm if Ora were bigger, she could probably do a titfuck on him~?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More Ranch!

Thank you for blessing us with another chapter! Now things are really starting to get to the important sections. Will the letters get delivered? Who is Valina plotting for? Is the witch still involved with this milk shenanigans? What’s helping the crows? So many questions, so little time for Senya. An interesting market day indeed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Man really hoping Seven survive. Damn Chiffhanger can't wait for next Chapter. 10 Stars as always

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I find it funny that a girl has been sent from the post office. Because knowing you, someone's in for a sexy time...

LewsTherinTalamonLewsTherinTalamonover 6 years ago
Cliffhanger!

Well, this could be interesting.

As a side note, I almost feel bad for the messenger girl. She's totally screwed.

*ba-dum tss*

tied26tied26over 6 years ago
Pretty Great

Good as always-I’m missing the lesbian action you usually stick in pretty regularly in your stories though.

GigglingGoblinGigglingGoblinover 6 years agoAuthor
Sapphic Action

I know, I've been emphasizing the malesub-femdom a lot of late. Stay tuned! We'll be mixing it up shortly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Irritating

I know the story is already written but at this stage I am finding the main characters lack of willpower more irritating than anything else. At this stage he has no redeeming features at all and the only reason to persist with the story is to find out who is doing the plotting.

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