All Comments on 'Monstrous Ranch Ch. 18'

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Seriously, if your intention was to make these sex scenes less hot and more disturbing, you've succeeded. I've been needing to skip them lol this is great though. I'm real proud of Senya for making it out of there. He didn't resist completely, but he managed to escape. He even saved Valina. I wonder how that will change their relationship, or if it will change anything at all.

Valina certainly has bad intentions. Too bad Senya couldn’t save the girl and get some answers but props for getting him to resist but barely! Perfect for his personality. We’re also getting some Anya which is nice!

Here's how I can tell your stories are good; I'm actually rooting for the characters to succeed instead of submitting. That's not usually the case. The writing in this one seemed particularly good, but I'm hoping something will happen important to the plot soon. Also hoping for Alrek-related stories sometime.

You know the more I read this the more I'm convinced this place should be burned to the ground and literally every living thing inside it should be executed. Not one single creature in this story deserves to live given the threat they pose and the casual disregard for other living things they display. It's more like a horror movie filled with sex then anything else. I can't even find it sexy, just terrifying.

I think I'm done, this is the most horrifying story I've ever read on this site and that's saying something.