All Comments on 'Montana to L.A. Ch. 03'

need longer chapters

I like how you add other elements to the characters. Keep it up!

I like the length of the chapters. I also like the characters. Janelle showing remorse for her seduction added to her character, she's not the pervert after all. Thank you.

I really liked the part where Jordan saves Emma from the run away horse and when Emma's says she is in love with Jordan, I think Jan has a new model now

So good. So hot. So sensual. I love shower sex.

I really like everything about this series of stories. It's a lot of fun, with interesting people and situations.

More, please.

O2, you have earned 5 stars from me. I've been very critical of Janelle and her sexual trysts with her deceased lover's daughters, but I feel she somewhat redeemed heself in her remorse and vow to not let it happen again (thank you). I'm please at the progression of Emma and Jordan. Those were some beautiful scenes between the two of them. First Loves are so special and timeless. Great job

Wow! I agree with the other readers that this is an incredibly hot and erotic story series. But I disagree with the suggestions that Janelle's erotic feelings for and experiences with her "nieces" shouldn't be continued--I think, on the contrary, that these add to the complexity and naughtiness of the series. Keep up the good work! I'm already looking forward to the next installment!

You have to keep this going. I love everyone in this story.

Please don't stop!