All Comments on 'Montana to L.A. Ch. 04'

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jenorma2012 over 7 years ago

Pretty good

Not a bad ending, I liked the part with the baseball game and how one of the girls knew one of the players

NetteS over 7 years ago

Awwww

I hate to see this end. I had hoped for more....

Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

Oh no

Loved the way you developed the stories and the characters but I thought we had got past these terrible endings a long time ago.

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