All Comments on 'Mood Slime Ch. 02'

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Arronbird85Arronbird85over 8 years ago

Loved this chapter, especially when the slime sounded John. It was so sexy, and then when the hands reached out of the sofa to restrain and jack him off. Eager to find out what happens when the slime gets into the room down below, maybe with two or my guys involved..... Would love for the slime to follow John back to his place and dissolve his clothing completely take him there, mmm can't wait. Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good work!

I'm really enjoying this, but I noticed a few typos and run on sentences. Nothing a little bit of proof reading can't fix. Great job :)

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...

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