All Comments on 'Mood Slime Ch. 15'

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Anonymousabout 7 years ago

Too many exclamation points

Great story but the exclamation points were kinda overused. It slightly ruined the story.

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...

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