All Comments on 'Moonlight'

Great start, needs another chater at least.

Really great story.

A good story with a decent plot, care and attention taken with character development, dialogue and relationshiop between the two protagonists.

Recommended.

Your descriptions were fantastic and Joanne's internal dialogs were great! Loved it! Naturally I'd like to know more about what happens to them going forward (obviously there are going to be some strains put on the relationship) but understand that the story could, if you insisted, end here. But more would be nice!

This is a great story. Please write more!

Loved it, the emotions, the build up, everything!

Hope there is more to come

Just perfect

Please give us more. I really enjoyed the story.

This is a very heart-warming story and oddly sexy at the same time. Loved it! Like the others I would like to see the more chapters mainly because these characters are so endearing. Especially Joanne. Hope for more chapters to come!

I ranked it as a 5, something I give to professional writing pieces. Because it captures small pieces of reality such as the face of the father when he realises that he has failed. Good story