All Comments on 'Moonlight Swim'

by m_storyman_x

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Ohhhhh...

Could have been the cowboy hat and boots, but the moonlight and swim had something to do with it....

OvercriticalOvercriticalover 8 years ago
Welcome to Fairyland

There's nothing wrong with out of this world fantasy on Literotica. You could say how unrealistic this tale was, but who cares? That's why we all gather here: to dream and fantasize about things that we'll never have, but can enjoy vicariously while we're here. Thanks. 4* (because nothing's perfect).

fixer43fixer43over 8 years ago
Nitpick

Really enjoyed it, certainly a fantasy dream come true.

Worst I can say about it is a little grammar correction. It's 'fare' for a cab/limo, not 'fair'.

gsmoke13gsmoke13over 8 years ago
fantastic as always

Welcome back!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Welcome back

Seemslike it has been ages since I last read one of your stories.

Really enjoyed this limo interlude.

Hope you have another story in process.

Cheers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More please

Love your stories. Wait and wait and wait for them to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I Have Known a Few... 5*

This is great fantasy, rich woman looking for romantic love keeps finding the jerks that give the rest of us men a bad rap. As for any criticism, those who think this type of story is unrealistic, HAS NOT LIVED, LOVED OR BEEN LOVED. Great story, well told with sizzling romantic love/sex.

KarensClit1990KarensClit1990almost 6 years ago
I really liked your story.

The sex scenes were toasty hot!

And the story itself was terrific.

Thank you ☺️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Overcritical was nice to you

He usually gives out 3*, rarely 4*. I think he was nicer back then.

afosi2604afosi2604about 1 year ago

A worthwhile fantasy!

DuncanitaDuncanita10 months ago

This feels like there should be a part2 coming up...

tsgtcapttsgtcapt2 months ago

Enjoyed before and again... thank you.

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I love the outdoors, fishing, hunting , boating, photography, writing and of course SEX ! I have a fertile mind of ideas and have written many of them in my stories here. After 40+ years of marriage and raising a family I'm ready to live some of those fantasies, even though...