All Comments on 'More Fool Me'

Great dialogue. I loved everything about this story. A true winner!

I hope you're still planning on finishing Enlightened Descent. This was fun, and enjoyable, but not what I was expecting. I love your writing. Please continue with your longer stories, they are so riveting.

Lol... I just cannot overstate how much I love that ending, the whole thing is priceless though :)

This was an interesting and fun story. The only problem that really nagged at me throughout the story is the plot point with Samantha where she fucked somebody with a big cock and as a result her vagina is just hopelessly stretched out for life. That's not how this works. That's not how any of this works. I understand that as an author you needed a way for Missy to get back at Samantha, but the plot device chosen for that purpose doesn't work very well. Notwithstanding that one plot element, the story is otherwise pretty much perfect.