All Comments on 'More than a Ghost Ch. 02'

Incredible, keep it up!

Demon indeed; hot stuff

Very, very, intense.

Amazing adventure! I hope you will continue to share the ride!

This is great fiction. Please continue if you ever have the chance. I would like to see if Pris does anything with the formula.

I hope it will continue soon.

My body got off to the main story, my mind got off on the last sentence.

This series is one of the best I have ever read. Very well written. Keep up the excellent work.

And thanks for reading!

I've enjoyed reading both parts of this story several times, waiting for the next chapter. I'm hoping you will continue it soon. Thank you for all of your time and effort.

This story DEFINITELY needs another chapter...

Obviously with the damage she's done to him, there's no way she can't know it was him - somehow - next she sees him... But how either of them will react on that meeting... THAT'S the kicker...

Very odd but very good story...

What a great and well written story.

I want more! There has to be another chapter. I hope you are continuing to write more of Abner's story. I also want to know more about Amber and Rebecca. What about the Institute and the future of his project? Please write more of this story.

This is one of those stories you forget have characters. They became relatable people that invited us in to share in their lives. We need to see more from these people.

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this is so good!!!

Holy shit dude..where's part 3? This is actually so good

Posibly the best story I hav read on this site. Not an origanal consept, but a very well writen and considerd story. Briliant. Can't waight for part 3.

Why stop? Hope you are ok.

Dammit!! Of all the rotten luck. To stumble on the start of an incredible series that isnt finished and likely never will be. Over a decade has passed since this was posted so I doubt highly it will ever be continued.

What a shame...what a god damned shame.

I strongly agree with the below statement. A 5+ turned into a 1-. A really great beginning cut off without reason.

Bill S.

A brilliant story that is crying out to be concluded.

A 5 star project.