All Comments on 'More Than Friends'

ok , so you had sex. no real story here.

You need to develop the characters more. What was the issue that had Evie upset? Why is Bayard nurturing in the beginning, and won't meet her eye at the end?

Many friends are afraid to take the next step. It is better to take a chance than regret it.

Great, but moves so fast - would love some more detail/backstory/anticipation.