All Comments on 'More Than Jon Could Chew Ch. 01'

- especially as a first story. I look forward to reading the next chapter/s. Thanks for writing and submitting your story and welcome to Literotica.

By the way, it's 'bear with me' - unless, of course you mean getting undressed ;!) Come to think of it, that might well be what you meant - four stars.

Very good first outing. It will be interesting how you develop it. He's there out of desperation not real desire. She's starry eyed and feeling dissed.

thank you! I've bee a bit busy lately. I should be able to get to the next part in a week or so. :)

I see that it has been a while since you posted this. I hope that you have not lost interest in continuing. I know that I would enjoy a few more chapters.

Though I prefer my men in Alpha roles, I enjoyed this easy read:)