All Comments on 'More Than Scenery Ch. 02'

I thoroughly enjoyed your writing. The imagery is exquisite. I have to say that I looked up the first chapter and read it before chapter 02. Captivating both chapters. Thank You. P.S. I'm too old to wait so long between chapters. Please let this story of passion continue soon. I could die waiting but as they say what a way to go.

I really hope there is more soon!!!!

Please continue this story..I'm really into it.. and it reminds me of jade and althea of TRMD of their first meeting..that certain attractions between them is undeniable.Don't get me wrong I'm not comparing and so on..I just love this..

Awesome.

Thank you.

More? Please.

I don't understand why this doesn't have a higher rating. The descriptions are beautiful, the whole story is sensuous, and the sex is HOT.

And offered a real opportunity for you to follow it up with something spectacular...

There was feeling and excitement in Chapter 1, development and hopes of love!

Only to be left done after reading this... I love your writing, just not this Chapter...

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Aah - and the plot thickens. I like the fact we're getting a chance to see into the complexities of these two women. It makes it more "real" and it gives the story more dimension. I see them hurling towards love and I'm looking forward to its continued development. Great job

loved it all, great writing, and I hope for another chapter soon, don't leave it for any longer..

Please gift us with Chapter 3!

Another short lovely episode, a short trip down the gangplank and the growing desire both are spiraling into ….. now after 9 years its already 6 years ago again, just another 3 years for the next journey the girls will be enjoying?

Its a cute sweet tale and may an epilogue both are settled in a comfy partnership together would top it

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