All Comments on 'More than Siblings Ch. 01'

Where's the story? Sure the action, or at least the start of it, is here but how did ti get there?

Can't wait for more !

Turn it off. Matey should be Maybe. All in all a good story

Good start. Keep it going.

Good idea, but try re doing this with more build up and background. this little bit could be turned into 3 pages alone.

Just getting started and it stopped! How about a whole chapter next time and not something the size of a paragraph.

I hope he inserts a toothpick in her bunghole while she takes his plump cockhead up one of her mutated nostrils.

Bad spelling.... bad grammar and a storyline a 12 yr old kid would write. Take up golf or fishing as literotica def. isn't your thing !!

just wish that you and a lot of other authors would not be in such a rush to get to the intimate parts of the story. a quiet build-up would be so much more appreciated.

I am curious how you could slow this story given the start that it has. good premis.

interesting follow-up?

You have my attention. I really want to read where this goes.

My title said it. Write don't read, let the sister speak.

ST

Would love for more of this story!

My cousin and I actually did a similar thing, except she stayed outside of my boxers and just rubbed me. I didn't cum. It was under the covers during a movie night with my family all around us. I was 16 and she was 14 at the time

You can't watch her moving her hand up and down her thigh when you are both covered by a blanket