All Comments on 'More Than Words Ch. 02'

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trite_readertrite_readerover 11 years ago
Wow dude

Really, really great writing. I've read published authors that couldn't write like this. Bravo! I'm looking forward to more from you.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
LIKE THE COMMANDMENTS

they are all good....and vows are to be followed. TK U MLJ LV NV

bruce22bruce22over 8 years ago
Fantastic but exciting

The first person narration is a bit tiring but otherwise it is good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

wow poor girl she thinks she is unworthy

huge respect for grant he is nothing like her shrewed father who felt nothing for her mother he hide the fact that he was already married and used kisara to blackmail her mom and sent her as an escort to his target no her poor mother was never loved

sad

evans and grant are exception for treating asian women with respect

white men view asian women just as whores only

sad but reality

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