All Comments on 'More Than You Know Ch. 05'

This story is getting better and better. Every new chapter brings about a different 'feel' to the whole story, and I have to say it, but I just can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter.

"Oh, I'm sorry, sir, but that offer just expired and is no longer valid."

That is the funniest thing I have read in a long time. This chapter was so good. Can't Wait for the next one. Cheers :D

Have to agree love it

That was a good one lol .

Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and am glad tht things are progressing well for Luke and Steven. :-) Awaiting the next chapter.

Happy Writing!

I went back and read the rest of this story before I read this one. I'm absolutely loving your work, it's a lovely story and you've brought the characters to life.

I´m so happy for bouth andcan´t wait to read more...

More please!

I am enjoying this story. My one complaint is that there is so much time between chapters.

Where's Chapter 6? I will be going through withdrawals until then. This an excellent story. And, I love these guys together...and Ana is perfect. Everything is coming together nicely so far.

intresting looking forward to reading the rest of this series.? x x x x x x

Blood good read is correct, :)

I love the story the sex and connection. I cant help but be held up by that first chapter and keep thinking, poor Adam he was so fucking cheated out of everything. His life his love his daughter and this new guy gets what should be his. Not a flaw w the story just me its life and it fucking sucks.💘 u Adam lol

I really like Luke as a character and think he seems a perfect match for Steven. But when his POV is expressed there continues to be something that makes him seems kinda douchey. Comments like “Steven’s attractive but I’ve bedded much more gorgeous guys with abs from Men’s Health” or “sex with Steven isn’t technically the hottest I’ve ever had.” I suspect these aren’t meant to make him sound like a douchebag - and may even be intended to be somehow romantic - but IMO they really detract from Luke’s likeability. He’s seemed this way throughout the whole story. Maybe this is just me...

Anon over 1 year ago,

Is this the same anon commenting on the type of gay in the previous chapter? It's just you.

I think you interpreted his perspective a bit too crazily and taking it to heart in a sensitive way. Luke has a past life, everyone does. He sleeps with other men a lot back then, and it's just his way of saying that this is the first time he felt something different.

It's his way of saying that love doesn't need both parties to look like something out of a men's magazine.