by ahaz
Well done on this well written tale, really appreciate length, plot and character development. Keep it going, you have talent. Thanks.
your such an ass-hat! 8 pages of pure GOLD, sure there where issues here and there, but the small stuff aside...
I HATE CLIFFHANGERS, ESPECIALLY when it comes to GOLD!
Interesting tale developing here. I'm looking forward to the future.
Well written, very good character development, natural dialogues. A couple of minor spelling mistakes but nothing that interferes with the flow.
I am impatiently waiting for the next Chapter. Everything about this story is perfect, plot, build up, character creation. It's all great. I do have 1 issue. When will the next chapter be posted????? You got me with the cliffhanger..
It has now been almost exactly 1-1/2 years and still no follow up. Did something happen to you or did you just forget about all us that loved what you have done so far? Please do not drop us hanging on.