All Comments on 'Morgan Meets an Angel'

SOME PRONOUN PROBLEMS THAT A GOOD EDITOR WOULD FIX, BUT YOUR STORY LINE WAS GOOD.

Hey, anonymous commenter #1, what's with the shouting? That's rude. Get rid of the caps lock.

While I agree that there are some typos and missing commas, it doesn't detract from the story much. And what a story! I really liked the twist at the end.

In a few paragraphs there were some sentences that just seemed stacatto, to brief and cut off to quick. What might help would be if you were to read it out loud when you edit. Nicely done.