All Comments on 'Morning Distraction'

by fire_breeze

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wow

That's all... Just... "Wow!"

PassionatePattyPassionatePattyover 15 years ago
Very good!!!

Keep up the good work, FB!

rbijonrbijonover 15 years ago
Fire as always

This is so you!

Sensual touching, making sexuality happen!

toys_em_ustoys_em_usover 15 years ago
Sunrise

Fire, sunrise was a most appropriate time to read this story. Your writings make us feel as if we are there with you, watching. Painting such a wonderful picture of awakenings. Please refresh that wonderful gift and start another.

toys_em_ustoys_em_usover 15 years ago
Sunrise

Fire, sunrise was a most appropriate time to read this story. Your writings make us feel as if we are there with you, watching. Painting such a wonderful picture of awakenings. Please refresh that wonderful gift and start another.

availableslave2uavailableslave2uover 15 years ago
So Damn Hot!

you write with such emotion. your descriptions make me feel like i were there, experiencing it too. thank you for finally posting your talent. i can't wait to read more from you.

availableslave2uavailableslave2uover 15 years ago
So Damn Hot!

you write with such emotion. your descriptions make me feel like i were there, experiencing it too. thank you for finally posting your talent. i can't wait to read more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
lovely

very very enticing and engaging

very well written and constructed ..and sizzling HOT ..very visual

look forward to much much more for the feverish fiery breeze

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Lovely

Really fantastic story, glad I popped by and read it, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Beautiful

Very well written. Loved it!

SxRxSxRxalmost 15 years ago
Sunrise!

Sunrise is not usually my best time of the day, but your Morning Distraction was a wonderful little diversion of morning self delight. It was very inviting. The images of the long hair, the sheets, the phone falling, all added an element of reality which made it all the more arousing as your characters inspired each other. I could do sunrise. Mmmm

SxRxSxRxalmost 15 years ago
Sunrise!

Sunrise could become my favorite part of the day. MmmHmm

fatangfatangover 14 years ago
a delicious story

I loved this story. It had such an authentic feel, not contrived at all. Feels like it is a reflection of something that happened and was immediately written to ensure such a lovely experience be preserved. Very erotic, a real turn-on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
GRRRR - Great

FB,

Awesome story!

I know exactly how your guy in the story feels...

I love to help "distract" my friends (anyway possible).

Knowing I am responsible (fully or partially) for their pleasure is the most amazing feeling.

Thanks for sharing that experience.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wow

this is better than coffee in the morning!!

love it!

I would love a distraction like this, well done.

InspiriniousInspiriniousover 10 years ago

A great short story and so well told. Captures the feelings and emotions of a quick "distraction". Short, simple, elegant.

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