by fire_breeze
Fire, sunrise was a most appropriate time to read this story. Your writings make us feel as if we are there with you, watching. Painting such a wonderful picture of awakenings. Please refresh that wonderful gift and start another.
Fire, sunrise was a most appropriate time to read this story. Your writings make us feel as if we are there with you, watching. Painting such a wonderful picture of awakenings. Please refresh that wonderful gift and start another.
you write with such emotion. your descriptions make me feel like i were there, experiencing it too. thank you for finally posting your talent. i can't wait to read more from you.
you write with such emotion. your descriptions make me feel like i were there, experiencing it too. thank you for finally posting your talent. i can't wait to read more from you.
very very enticing and engaging
very well written and constructed ..and sizzling HOT ..very visual
look forward to much much more for the feverish fiery breeze
Sunrise is not usually my best time of the day, but your Morning Distraction was a wonderful little diversion of morning self delight. It was very inviting. The images of the long hair, the sheets, the phone falling, all added an element of reality which made it all the more arousing as your characters inspired each other. I could do sunrise. Mmmm
I loved this story. It had such an authentic feel, not contrived at all. Feels like it is a reflection of something that happened and was immediately written to ensure such a lovely experience be preserved. Very erotic, a real turn-on!
FB,
Awesome story!
I know exactly how your guy in the story feels...
I love to help "distract" my friends (anyway possible).
Knowing I am responsible (fully or partially) for their pleasure is the most amazing feeling.
Thanks for sharing that experience.
this is better than coffee in the morning!!
love it!
I would love a distraction like this, well done.
A great short story and so well told. Captures the feelings and emotions of a quick "distraction". Short, simple, elegant.