All Comments on 'Morning drinks with mom'

Good story. You need to continue with more chapters. Maybe a couple pages added with extra adventures described, I mean you still have to claim Rose. Loved the descriptions of Joyce. Nice size tits. Now that you've claimed her as your bitch & cucked your dad the first time, keep on cucking him. Take her in front of him & make him watch. Explain that you are now her man & she will now be your breeding bitch & he will watch you seed her. Let him know that you might allow him to soak his little dick inside Juicy Joyce once in a while after he gets snipped so he doesn't soil your first home that you've now reclaimed. Just some thoughts. Great start. 5☆

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The inch by inch play by play was weird. Story was super hot but ruined by that.

I would have loved to fuck my mother that way. Good job.

Great start. Love to see additional chapters. Maybe one that includes a little back history as to why mom decided to giver herself to her son? Other's, where do mom and son go from here? Look forward to reading more of your stories. TY

This definitely needs more chapters

If you really want to make her your bitch she MUST beg you to ass fuck her into submission destroying her ass. Then a good golden shower assuring she knows you own her and will use her like you dedicate whore

Loved that she cleaned up the mess she made.

Good start.

Great start, more chapters!

Would have rated this a four ( 4 ) had you done a dedicated proof reading caught a few gaffs.

Rammed fucked should have been ram fucked.

Deep inside used three times in a four line paragraph

It seems an edit should have caught this, and other repitions, in similarily short paragraphs.

The premise is strong, and in parallel with many young men's dreams.

Trendous Portential.

l agree, a good start. I did have a bit of an issue visualizing the scene, however. Taking Joyce doggy style, Peter's balls would be slapping her labia and clit, not her ass cheeks. Keep the visuals in mind with your next story. Overall, I liked it and yes, a good start.

Nice first story. Thanks for submitting.

Hope she can bring some Milk for him in the next chapter!

I did not enjoy him giving her orders though 4 stars.