All Comments on 'Morning Routine'

A nice first story and please do write more. A few details leave my wondering. Is their hair really scarlet? You meant scarlet, not just redhead? Like two Anime characters? Are they really sisters and twins, or sister slaves who have worked at matching for master? I think it's the second, but I am not sure which choice is your fantasy. Toward the end, Master slaps Anna's butt; then the next slaps, are those to the face? Anna seems to like it rougher throughout the scene, but face slaps turn off many readers, including me. Master leaving while Sara completes the punishment may be fine between an established threesome, yet it feels wrong. Why doesnt he stay or want to stay? Oh, and when you describe Master seeing the edge of Anna's boobs while standing behind her, it kind of reads as if her boobs are ON her back. Awkward wording there.