All Comments on 'Morning Sickness'

Can't wait to read more. Breed them all.

For being blunt and wasting my time with a truncated short story.

...why wouldn't the "bitch" captain just have him restrained at the first sign of his refusal to cooperate and just continue extracting his semen involuntarily?

Lets hope you plan on a Series so many women so many Possibilities.

I just wanted more, I fancy a series on this, maybe he could fuck someone he actually likes?

I just submitted "Part 2" which continues the story and is twice as long - by itself - as Part 1. Just give the reviewers a couple of days and I think I'll take care of *all* of the suggestions and criticism made so far.

Going to read part 2. I like the main character, in the fact that he so far seems to be a dick. Much like the men I end up with. :-) keep writing!!

I'd love seeing him fuck a woman he actually admires to balance things out. Maybe an old smokin' hot teacher. It'd be fun for him to make love with her during a school class or a school assembly, under the conceit of a 'Practical Sex-Ed' demonstration.

Maybe bring in some male students for shits and giggles.

chapter 2 is the same as chapter 1. what's going on?

one if the things that I thouroughly enjoyed was the way that you described the beginning of the scene, you laid out the setting nicely but a little more detail in further entries would be appreciated, for example when you reach the end it seems rushed and then bam that's it, pregnant. but something that I feel would be needed is a little more of a how does the daughter look as her mother is forced to do these things, unable to stop or move away, how is the mothers insides moving as she reaches her forced climax. just general feedback but would love to see you take it into consideration.

Just because a woman has sex with a man doesn't mean that he impregnates her. The human sex act only results in pregnancy 30 percent of the time. The female MUST be ovulating, so to be efficient our hero needs to know what condition his intended mate's condition is in. Thought that should be considered.

Nice, but a little rushed. Great setup! 5 for originality.