All Comments on 'Morton Magic'

very tender , sweet and felt like a totally natural progression.

Very well written. Credible. Love the pace. Any chance of developing this story (I don't mean involving the daughter) into how their affair continues secretly in a work setting?

Tender, loving story. I enjoyed reading it very much.

I love work related stories. We spend so much time there trying to make a living, we forget to live a little.

The story was well written and very plausible. Loved it.

Can't wait to hear about day 2.

A hot and sexy story. I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.

I did enjoy reading the story. Enough details to get the juices flowing without overwhelming and distracting. I have to admit to loving the fact that this was set in England with English characters. Keep em coming. - Kami

but unfortunately, I can't recall such tender relationships as depicted in this story. As usual, Alex tells a believable tale, perhaps with a bit more forthrightness than I have experienced with women, but that's what helps to intensify the eroticism. I can remember a one-night episode that began in an elevator at a convention and was mostly, as memory serves, her suggestion, rather than mine, although it didn't take me long to be most agreeable. I think all men and probably most women fantasize about such encounters both on trips and, indeed, in the office where everyday occurrences can lead to more ... much more. Hopefully, Alex can explore more of the travel and office experiences. Thanks for a good read.

Particularly enjoyed the English setting in this story. Keep writing. I enjoy everything I've read.

At a guess, a "mill shop" is what we on the other side of the pond call an "outlet store" or "factory outlet". Is that right? (Tried looking up without any luck.)

you can tell most of the time the difference between an American & an English writer . arse instead of ass swimming coustume instead of bathing suit. doesn't take away from the story makes ,more fun to read.

I actually believe this story could happen. As usual for Alex, the romance is real and the sex just a part of the story. I love the style.