All Comments on 'Most Valuable Player'

by Ann Douglas

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KnightofoilKnightofoilover 6 years ago
Nice story

Hgood story. I like the build up and her blunt ness. Honest. Hot too.

AtrampboyAtrampboyover 6 years ago

Loved it! I hopethere sre more to come

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
MVP

Great tail...err tale.

Mines on for the conclusion END.

Think we don't know?

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
They might form a league of their own

One with two MVPs

KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 5 years ago
Nice...Again. You're two for two with me!

I have a soft spot (that gets harder...:+)) for women who

make their desires clear.

In both stories, your context details are admirable. Good Job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Who's Moria?

Who's Moria? did some ones name change?

chytownchytownalmost 5 years ago
Now That Was A Lucky Strike*****

And a very entertaining story. Thanks for sharing.

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I'm an average wife and mother, well, maybe not so average, who likes to write Erotica. I'm not a professional writer. In fact, until I tried writing my first story in the early 90s, I hadn't written anything longer than a letter since high school 20 years before. I like ...