All Comments on 'Mostly Myself'

Get an editor and dump the self-reflection.

Get someone to help you with the editing...and stop using "piece of advice" so often, it not only distracts from the story, but it is aggravating...

...Well, you know what that joke is full of!

cvr, i actually enjoyed the stylism of your writing. You go write all ahead full and right whatever you want to say , however you want to say it. Double figs and a royal razzberrie to the whiny annoynousies!

Just that Fan

"...she finds her pinned against the refrigerator door..."

Spelling, grammar, punctuation, wrong words, missing (half)words... they're not optional!!!