All Comments on 'Motel'

Wanker

You're clearly a moron, Mr Anonymous. This is a brilliant story, a very apt description of a event we've all gone through at one time or another. I suppose it may be that you've never had the chance to fuck a woman you love in this situation. That must be it...

Anyway, AnneArbor, this is the best little story I've read in ages. It reminded me of a time when we were in a somewhat similar situation, and how much we laughed about it the following day...

Good Job!!

Harry Haversackers

Been there, done that. It was years ago. Now I wonder if we were fooling anybody. We thought we were. Hey, great writing and storytelling. You seem to prefer the short story form. You might do much.

A very sexy and well written story...