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by Ashson

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
You have changed

Your writing style of late and I like it, also went from one page stories to two pages making for more interesting reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Interesting

It was not a bad story at all a i enjoy reading your stories. The way you went from Marie to Donna talking about the same person was confusing a little. Maybe you can explain. Have a great week and keep writting

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