All Comments on 'Moth to a Flame'

I am a writer by profession and by passion. I read many stories in here, and I have to say that yours is truly magnificent. It had raw erotic pleasure at the end, yes, but it also drew in the reader to make he/she feel as though they were there. I felt the woman's poignant feelings of time past. I truly loved this story, you have great style and imagination. Well done.

A fellow Writer,

_Lady1SensuaL1Fire_

Nice write Endeavor I liked now you pulled me into your plot

and kept me clued to the story very very nice

Endeavor

very nice write I like now you ull the reader into your story line as if he/ she were a character in the story

I liked it, what was the purpose of the entity mating with her though? There is always a reason for everything. Keep writing.