All Comments on 'Mother and Son's First Time Pt. 01'

Good luck and can’t wait for the next.

let your husband go to bed while you fuck your son.

First time story was agood one.

More please

I wish I was your son...👅

you have an interesting style but you need more buildup, start with her day wherever she is, color out her regular relationship with her son and husband, draw out the movie scene more, it's literary foreplay. then dont end the part one when it just begins to heat up. Try going farther into it. and remember to draw it out, paint a picture for your readers. But again good start, now hone your skill

I enjoyed your story I hope you have more coming that was a good start

Only advice is to just keep telling whatever story you have to tell. Grammer is important due to read-ability but style is subjective so don't worry about that. I liked it and hope to read more from you.

Excellent first time story - hope you're going to expand on it keeping all 3 characters involved !!

Really great first time story. I loved the line 'kiss me til I cum', and the promise that lies ahead. Please finish the story soon so we can enjoy what comes next!

Brilliant start. Look forward to many more episodes. Is there a daughter in the family as well?

That would be hot

great start, please continue. Its so taboo that its a super thrill to think about.

yes carry on with all three involved, play the seductress to both and enjoy being shared and loved by both, but no bisexual.

So erotic I had to stop reading at times. All families should experience such uninhibited love.

More breastfeeding please!

I just wanted to say great job on your 1st story and encourage you to keep contributing.

This is just advice for future stories, nothing to do with this one but for the future make sure you do lots of voyueristic scenes, accidental bumps, feels, touches, seeing things the characters weren't supposed to see, upskirts, downblouses, etc. It all lends so much in this genre!

Anyways just some pointers for the future, this one was a fun little short story that got your feet wet (and maybe something else!). Great job, keep going!

great story in many ways; desire to have your son suckle you and then your husband kissing and turning him on, a family 3some. How much is based on desire or facts?

Meaning that I read this story after Pt.02 and Its 100% accurate!!

She is definitely a "dirty girl" AND the mother of the year haha.

This series gets more kinkier with each one,please continue with more.

A fan:)

This is your first story? This was amazing. Keep them coming!

magical

Fun story. I like when the author doesnt spend 2 chapters getting to the srx. I like to see you finish the story and see where mom n son go and maybe...include dad in the fun

I like your style. Write more for us baby

keep em comin lol

Yummy!!!