All Comments on 'Mother: Comfort'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Really

Reaching her mother's g-spot with her tongue. Not physically possible

va45va45over 7 years ago
Wow

Wonderful start, looking to see if mom gives up guys totally and toys come out next.

Funewriter1Funewriter1over 7 years ago
Great Beginning

I can't wait to read your next installment. Your story was well written, entertaining and VERY exciting. Keep writing.

Randee2058Randee2058almost 7 years ago
Loving Comfort

Love the way you started off this series. Hope it maintains the implied relationship between each other. Looking forward too reading the other chapters.

5🌟's 🌹🌹

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Story BUT

You might want to proofread your story and resubmit. There are not only misspellings but a number of word omissions and misused words. You definitely overused the word 'soothingly'.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
a few things

this was a good story and all but there were some errors and problems that kept me from getting into it, such as missing words, spelling errors, and the jump from her being asleep to suddenly full blown sex and the slight inconsistency during the sex as well, I'm also going to assume the daughter is in college but try to make it more obvious at first i had thought she was a freshman in high school due to phrasing, but again good premise just need to improve the execution.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
fuck

only thing that could make this better is some comforting nursing before or after the sex... other than that it was perfect <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

in what order am i supposed to read these chapters

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