by hasnoalias
Reaching her mother's g-spot with her tongue. Not physically possible
Wonderful start, looking to see if mom gives up guys totally and toys come out next.
I can't wait to read your next installment. Your story was well written, entertaining and VERY exciting. Keep writing.
Love the way you started off this series. Hope it maintains the implied relationship between each other. Looking forward too reading the other chapters.
5🌟's 🌹🌹
You might want to proofread your story and resubmit. There are not only misspellings but a number of word omissions and misused words. You definitely overused the word 'soothingly'.
this was a good story and all but there were some errors and problems that kept me from getting into it, such as missing words, spelling errors, and the jump from her being asleep to suddenly full blown sex and the slight inconsistency during the sex as well, I'm also going to assume the daughter is in college but try to make it more obvious at first i had thought she was a freshman in high school due to phrasing, but again good premise just need to improve the execution.
only thing that could make this better is some comforting nursing before or after the sex... other than that it was perfect <3