All Comments on 'Mother/Daughter Honeymoon Cruise Ch. 01'

by DuchessAllessa

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Too short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Some same, some different

I really like this. I hate the structure in the beginning. Look the mother's body, then the daughter's body. Oh and then the slight attraction. Yes it sounds familiar. The good part comes in the room. The electricity they exhibit is wonderful. Try to vary your exposition though.

ukbimumukbimumover 8 years ago
hope more to come

Great start to story.......loving the descriptions of breasts!!!!

BAD BOY BILLBAD BOY BILLover 8 years ago
Go Get Her... Mom.. Eat Your Baby Girl..

Slut mommy..better eat that pussy quick..She wants you...

Randee1958Randee1958over 8 years ago
Love It 😘

Anxiously awaiting the rest of the Book...😉 😍

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very good!

Like it! Well written. Not just blam fuck me.

Looking forward to more.

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
Yummy!

A great start, thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
and where is the rest?

and where is the rest?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

did she eat her mom?????

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