All Comments on 'Mother/Daughter Honeymoon Cruise Ch. 03'

The whole description of Heidi and the subsequent jokes made laugh way too much and that alone deserves a 5* rating, everything else is just a bonus!

A contest to see how long beach team can last riding a symbian without cuming

this is yummy - can't wait to see more action with mom and daughter!

You have brought these two wonderfully to a spot that is going to take them way beyond what they were afraid of and into the realm of WTF, but it has been a fun ride and for the most part with really nice steps. I didn't care much for the sister in law bathroom tryst, because, well I just don't like that sub/dom kink, but it did help to put Lynne in the right frame of mood so, Bravo!

It's a great story, and the sex scenes are super hot. But PLEASE, pick a Point of View Character and stick with it. Or if you're going to change, put in *** or something to let us know. It turns into mental whiplash otherwise.

Love the story but please stop using the 'what I wanted to say was...'. It makes the story harder to read.

You're overdo, and we're antsy:)

Hmmm??

So very good! Thank you!